Review: Definition Murder

Meg McCafferty is an inspector in the San Francisco Police Department. Still in the hope of a proper relationship, her only comfort at the moment is a bottle of wine as she teeters on the edge of alcoholism. However, one Monday morning, she is awoken by a telephone call informing her of the murder of a San Francisco State University freshman, Sarah Sinclair. It's down to McCafferty to investigate. 'Definition Murder' is a short novel and the pages move very quickly. It is easily readable in one sitting, particularly if you happen to be relaxing in the sun, on the beach or at a swimming pool. Burget Bailey's writing style is conversational, but sadly lacks the depth to make the novel meatier. It is a simple read, but at times, the reader will feel that there could be more character development. Secondly, the use of a thesaurus for synonyms is recommended. It may seem like a minor, even churlish gripe, yet there are only so many times that you can read about someone 'shrieking' before it starts to become aggravating. Women may shriek, but they certainly don't do it as much as Meg McCafferty. Sadly, this is not a complaint that can only be laid at the doors of fledgling novelists. In fact, established writers such as Dean Koontz are guilty of overusing certain words, such as 'blacktop', 'chuff' or 'susurration'. For someone of Koontz' literary standing, with his enormous vocabulary, this really does seem unforgivable. Burget Bailey's cast of character are interesting. There are some that are likeable, others that are detestable and others where the reader will be feeling ambivalent. The conclusion of the novel comes as somewhat of a surprise, though one of the twists appears telegraphed earlier on. Nevertheless, Meg McCafferty makes for a pleasant heroine, who seems all the more human for her flaws, such as alcoholism. I feel certain that Burget Bailey has got more in store for McCafferty and with a little bit more judicious editing, it would be an enjoyable novel for those mystery fans who don't like their crime too hardboiled.

Reprinted with permission. Do Not repost without permission from the author, Luke Croll - RAM

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Book Review: Definition Murder